A new avenue of the project is that I'm writing all of the copy for Susie's materials and website. Here is a sample that will be printed on the inside cover of the look book:
Bespoke, handmade & beautiful
From the tape measure around your waist to the finished article against your skin, Susie Burstein creates beautiful handmade lingerie to your specification.
Behind Susie’s design lies not just skill and precision, but a creative vision; whether for show or to be kept a secret, undergarments should make a woman feel exactly as she chooses.
It’s all about her.
Any proofreading will be appreciated. And thanks you all again for your opinions on the images below... keep them coming, really helpful and interesting for us.
4 comments:
er well you use 'you' and 'her' so just make sure you stay consistant with one of them. and for me the first line is a bit of a mouthful? otherwise looks great!
sorry, i mean this bit: From the tape measure around your waist, could be a bit more sharp?
Thanks Chris... will consider those points!
Personally i would refer to her using her surname rather than her first name, but other than that it sounds great! Nice work on the whole project by the way, its really come together nicely!
Sam
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